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» Poem: I did it
I did it
written by lost_cause
10:47 PM 11/18/04
Walking down the broken path I've created for myself
Passing all the things I brought that turned this into hell
Tripping over broken faith and falling into sadness
Laying shattered on the ground surrounded in my madness
Watching as my sorrows float through the darkened sky
Accompanied by my past, my youth that passed me by
Knowing I crushed myself and ripped apart my life
I finally give into pain and rip my arm open with my knife


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by sad_goth (11-18-2004 - 10:55 PM)
i hope you didn't actually cut yourselfe my friend used to do it and now she regrets it.

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