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broken hearted girl.....
written by vampire_princess01:31 AM 11/19/04I look in your eyes,
And I see the lies,
The same lies that caused my cries.
I touch your face,
And I remember that place,
That place we used to go,
The secret place we said we would never show,
To anyone else….
I hold your hand,
I am rushed with overwhelming pain that you can never understand,
That pain was never part of the plan.
As I kiss you one last time,
A part of me still wishes you were mine,
But the other part knows that after I put my heart on the line,
and You broke my trust,
My heart is once again beginning to bust,
I will now and forever mistrust.
As I walk away,
I wish so badly I could stay,
But after that day,
The only thing I have to say,
Is please just stay away. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by i*need*help*:) (11-19-2004 - 01:43 AM)
| i think that was a beautiful poem, that touches every one's heart in some way. :^) |
by devilchild01 (11-20-2004 - 09:10 AM)
| wow i love it
*hugs*
come take a look at mine
their not as good as yours thought
but still i try
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by (anonymous) (1-17-2005 - 02:32 AM)
| lot's of longing in that poem, kinda dark actually
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by gothvampirehaterguy (1-18-2005 - 01:50 AM)
| Amen. I have perminantly turned my back on love. it causes way too much pain, it's just not worth it. OH and the poem was great. :) |
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