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» Poem: SAVE ME*
SAVE ME*
written by devilchild01
10:53 PM 11/19/04
Save me

I’m running down a corridor.
I hear them laughing at me.

They say,
You cant run there’s nowhere for you to go.

I’m running faster and faster.
My heart beats harder.

My breath comes out fast.
And I can only take in small breaths.

Im feeling dizzy, im feeling sick
I want to stop but I cant let them get me.

I’m crying out in fear
Help me someone.

Tears drip off my chin
And crash to the floor.

I’m terrified.
They’re chasing me their getting closer.

I see a door.
Open please open.

Inside are my worst fears
They are there, hands grab out towards me.

I scream they have got me.
Help me please they are going to kill me.

They are pulling me closer towards them
But what’s that I see.

A bright white light
Come to save me from my fears.

It’s an angel come to take me to heaven

Its come to take away my fears
its come to quieten my screams

Saved me


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
can no on help me

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-20-2004 - 08:06 AM)
i like this one to its like a scary movie lol

by devilchild01 (11-20-2004 - 09:18 AM)
i will talk to you later nick and i know you just want to help love you loads

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