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written by Sharrain
04:33 AM 11/20/04
Do you care for how I feel
For how I take this shit
I make a mistake and its goes up in smoke
Are only your lies ok?

Don’t you see how much it hurts
When you look right through my scars
Don’t you notice my tears
Or the words I spill in hope
Hope that you will be there

You think you get used so much
But have you seen my life?
My boy has a girl already
I’m the back up plan
Try living one day in me
Try the lack of breath
Live through the hidden brusies

Don’t you see how much it hurts
When you look right through my scars
Don’t you notice my tears
Or the words I spill in hope
Hope that you will be there

I’m aloud to hit out if I want to


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just some more crap

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by Deadkittycat (11-20-2004 - 04:39 AM)
FUCK I love it god your so good its great keep on keepin on man!

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