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no escape**
written by devilchild0110:58 PM 11/20/04Im lost by myself
Trapped in a place
With no escape
No door to let me out
I have been here before
Walked through this
Place of despair
I left my mark craved in the wall
To many times
I have walked this road
Now it’s destroying me
It’s eating me whole
I can’t cope alone
I asked for help
But it didn’t come my way
Nobody seems to care
No one wants to know
Maybe they know
How lost i feel
Maybe they feel the same
Maybe they don’t want
To get dragged down to
Stuck with this feeling
Of dread, hope is now dead
I hoped it would get better
Knowing it wont
It’s to late
To ask for help
I’ll just walk this path
To the end of my life. |
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dont know what i was thinking
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| » Comments / Feedback | by FeeFee (11-20-2004 - 11:00 PM)
| Very good poem, makes you think, which is hard for me |
by silent_tears (11-20-2004 - 11:02 PM)
| Dam,that is gud...i really like it (but wot duz my opinion count?!) |
by SatanicSavior (11-20-2004 - 11:04 PM)
| One of the best fucking poems I've read. |
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