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Title's Too Long
written by DarkAngelBlood
09:30 PM 6/9/04
"Seeking Refuge in A Dark Corner of My Dark Lonely Room Tonight"
I could feel the sadness vibrating from a mile away. I for get about my every stupid problem today. I could feel the girl's aching heart inmine. It hurts so bad./I recognize when the tears form in my eyes, only when I'm submerged in darknesa alone. I can't fight the pain, it's everwhelming./It's really cold tonight. A night like this sems to last forever. Can't feel the warmth that was once there. I just want to escape the mourning and be by myself. I can't leave, they won't let me and it's disrespectful. I'm too scared to move. I can't move. They're crying and I am too. I'm so numb. The wetness of my tears soak into the pillow case and I drown myself in sorrow./I can't let this go. I feel what she feels. I got a hug today, but that's in the past. But my heart is still beating fast./ I feel lower than ever, my emotions taking over, only control I had. Don't have it anymore. I breakdown in this defeaning silence. The sound of my patheticness echos loudly, only heard by me. They're out there talking, I can hear them, not anymore. I cried myself to sleep. They were looking at me. I had to escape their awful faces.


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(This is a two-person point of view poem. Two people speak, and different emotions can be heard, but they both feel the same.)

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