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She was thinking
written by She_was_thinking06:15 PM 11/21/04She was thinking, thinking maybe it should end.
She spoke the words, only to make things worst.
The boy she loved did not love her back.
She kept trying but she knew it wouldn't last.
To just keeping living in this world of lies kill her more everyday.
She had mixed thoughts and her world was spinning.
She jumped off that bridge just to ease the pain.
She made the headlines of the news.
No one knew what she was thinking, But she did and thats all that mattered. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I had no idea were that came from, I found it in one of my notebooks and thought i would post it for you to read. I don't really understand it. Maybe you do?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Freak on a Leash (2-2-2005 - 09:54 PM)
| This poem is really good.
Keep on writing! |
by (guest) (2-7-2005 - 08:24 AM)
| Not a sestina. Not a poem. This is prose, and trite prose at that. |
by BlackFallenRoses (3-5-2005 - 09:08 PM)
| This is quite a good poem. I would like to read more, if you have any? |
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