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~~~~Thinking of You~~~~
written by gothicbob696911:40 PM 11/21/04Sometimes I can’t even go to bed
Because when I close my eyes
All I can see is you in my head.
I don’t think one day has gone by
That you haven’t crossed my mind.
Every time I remember, I cry.
How can you have meant so much to me
And I have meant nothing to you.
I was so blind there was so much I didn’t see.
It’s like I was lost and didn’t know what to say
Whenever you held me close
I just wish I would never had come to realize
The whole time I thought u cared
I had believed a lie |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
about a girl who broke my heart
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| » Comments / Feedback | by silentscreamsecretscars (11-23-2004 - 11:22 PM)
by (anonymous) (11-24-2004 - 12:02 AM)
| this poem is sad. it sux to think someone likes/loves you but it's all a lie. |
by (anonymous) (11-25-2004 - 01:50 AM)
| lol 1st of all u suck cuz u believed a lie fuckin loser 2nd ur poem sux 2 cuz u wrote it lol b more deep goddamn it! hope u die! love ya =) |
by juliasoul (11-25-2004 - 05:04 AM)
| Hope you die, Luv ya? kinda oximoronic don't you think? lol nice poem dude (oximoron=a phrase or sentence that's words contradict) |
by (anonymous) (11-25-2004 - 08:30 PM)
| lol yeah die and love ya? c the connection fucker i love him so much much that i want him 2 die means id love him 2 b dead! duh loser!!!! this is what i call poetry!!! lol |
by UnfortunatelyImOnlyMe (11-26-2004 - 12:15 AM)
| Love the poem. Very truthful and easy to relate to. |
by CLC_RockGirl (1-11-2005 - 03:37 PM)
| omg i love it it made me cry
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