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Insulin and Assholes
written by TAINTEDSOULisBACK
03:36 AM 11/22/04
I don't understand how we can be so close,
then a loosely thrown comment,
can ruin what I cherished most.
You can be so sweet sometimes,
I need an insulin shot,
and then you can be such an asshole,
all I want is for you to rot.
I don't know if you realize,
how much those things you say hurt,
but I'd like to think you don't,
because they make me feel like dirt.
I wish you could open your eyes,
and stop taking your pain out on me,
then maybe you would realize,
how much you mean to me.


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About a friend that frustrates me sometimes. Comment please.

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» Comments / Feedback
by lostdreamz08 (11-22-2004 - 03:40 AM)
awesome writing... i can totally relate to it

by (anonymous) (11-23-2004 - 11:51 PM)
I can relate to the writing alot. I'm also from ky and can relate to that as well!!

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