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» Poem: Commotion
Commotion
written by ForsakenDream
08:12 PM 11/22/04
Return to me all the things you've stolen,
Like my life, my joy, my self esteem.
Controling my thoughts with the blink of a dream.
Time to release all this built pressure,
It wont end quickly or at any measure.
Just hold my breathe and take a dive,
down to the depths of were my pain thrives.
How long can I live like this?
How long before they notice just what exactly it is I miss?
A small example of your shreded life,
ended quickly by a sword of lies.
Everyone haunts me on these cold nights,
Taken for granted everything that is right.
Shake me to existance and hope I live,
Take my hand and remind me how to give.
What else do I have to lose?
My trust is already lost in you.
Take my wrist and let it bleed,
It only takes a sprinkle of evil to plant its seed.
And after it grows there is no turning back,
Only thing left for me to do is plan my first emotional attack.


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