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blacken heart
written by blood lily
12:00 AM 11/23/04
people all have come to heed my
face, to laugh at my creed
but only you could see
my once happy heart, has been
torn apart, by the despetion of
the world.

why could you not understand
that i hold this world in my hands
why did it have to be you,
to make my world fall apart,
for i have loved you so,
i thought you'd never let me go
but that to was a lie,
they created to blacken this world

steal it's kindness away with your words
please forgive me
it's all my fault

i tried to make it right,
this pain i feel inside



and now with fauther ado,
i bid good day to you.


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this is very confussing yes?

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