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wishpers from within
written by Gothic_Vocalist4504:31 AM 11/23/04day by day
I wish for sopmthing more
But I don’t know what emontion to feel
I listen to wishpers to figure it out
So many voices kick in
The screaming and the shouting
To get my attention
It doesn’t matter
Cause I know what I want
Deep down inside its written all over
I want you again
But I cant
That the feeling that hurts the most
I wish I can forget everything and start over |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
for some one I once loved
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lostdreamz08 (11-23-2004 - 04:40 AM)
| GREAT poem, i can totally relate |
by Tanasa_bg (2-16-2005 - 10:24 AM)
| I like it. I could say that da maker of this poem got everything- feelings-yes, but talant 'n expressive speech , added with good frazes 'n interess ideas too |
by LadyAngele (4-12-2005 - 01:28 AM)
| Wow, such a beautiful poem, and so sad. This poem is easy to relate to for a lot of people I'm sure. You've captured a lot of emotions in it. Great job. |
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