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black roses and bloody kisses
written by bloodlyvalentine08:04 PM 11/23/04your touch is....
glourious
your kiss is...
mine
lay down this black rose
for me
wilted but still alive
death will be a mercy
stained black with sin
i still remember...
still remember the red
the rich red flowing from you
your lips
always stained red
and here i wait...
waiting for you
and your bloody kisses
take hold of me
i am only
yours
drowning in a pool
of our blood
mix us together
make us one
i dream of your
black rose
waiting for your
bloody kiss |
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this isnt actually supposed to make sense
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bloodlyvalentine (11-23-2004 - 08:10 PM)
| lol, thanks, its just a bunch of my daark thoughts |
by BloodshedRose (11-23-2004 - 08:14 PM)
| Very, very beautiful poem |
by Poison Ivy (11-23-2004 - 08:16 PM)
| this poem reminds me if my one true love, Jayson. beautiful poem. it makes perfect sense. *clapping* |
by blackgothicblood (11-23-2004 - 09:15 PM)
| i wish i could write like that my poems stink |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-24-2004 - 02:41 PM)
| im sure ur poems dont stink, i used to think my poems stunk aswell, but people obviously like them!!! |
by maledeth (11-27-2004 - 06:11 AM)
| I love it....greatness....glorious. |
by tru_midnight_rose (11-27-2004 - 03:47 PM)
| dude ure popular u poem did rock it so cool how do u do it wats ure secret? |
by darktinkerbell (11-28-2004 - 08:08 AM)
| This poem kicks ass, keep this up : ) |
by bloodlyvalentine (11-28-2004 - 08:20 AM)
| i think this is the most replies ive ever had! kiran, i was thinking about joe cahined to my bed *licks her lips* hehehehehe, thank u all, I LOVE U! |
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