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» Poem: Deep
Deep
written by gothicbob6969
08:52 PM 11/23/04
cuts, wounds
scars to deep
feeling faint
want to sleep
pull up
on my sleeve
and you will see
how i went to deeo
deepness lead to
dizzyness
then fainting
and finally
death
a forever sleep
that causes everyone
to weep
some will ask
why
and som will simply
cry
some will deny it
while others will simply know
the truth i tried
to show
deep i went
to let my feelings
vent
deeper and deeper i tried
more and more i cried
i tried to swerve
before i hit my nerve
i never saw the vein
i was trying
to get rid of my pain
open it split
right where
i had slit
i cut muscle
inside my skin
now i was also
bleeding within
the ending
is nearer
as i
grow drearier
oh poor mommy
please do not worry
i try to stand
as i grab
his hand
he looks
in my eyes
he knows
all my lies
he sees
all my sins
i try
not to cringe
he says
" it's not
time to go
there is still more
for you to know"
my eyes began to open
i felt like
i was chokin'
i heard a whisper
"look she's waking up"
people were all around
i couldnt feel
the ground
i tried sitting
i was really
hurting
i sat anyways
i looked her
in the face
i saw the hurt
and pain i had
caused her
she was really
sad and mad
she was
and still is
the bestest friend
i've ever had
i learned my lesson
im not messin'
never again
do i want that
look of disappointment
i wouldnt
be able to
handle it
now i know
never to go
deep
i no longer
use glass
she would
probably
kick my a**
i only use
stuff that's cheap
so i cannot
go to deep


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