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she is there
written by gothicbob696908:54 PM 11/23/04shes there when im pissed off
to help calm me down with her voice so soft
shes there when tears fall like rain
to help wash away all the pain
shes there when i just need a hug
to help fill the hole ive dug
shes there when i just need someone to listen and not judge
to help me chill out and replace fuck with fudge
shes there when i need to be slapped
to help me get past the person who has me wrapped
shes there when i need to be yelled at
to help me realize the hearts ive crushed with a bat
shes there to help me get through all the pain and hurt
to help me from becoming a bigger flirt
whats most important is i hurt her
and when i need her she still says sure
so for that and all she does i cant let her go
and i have to remember to be there when shes running low |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by shadowrestlin14 (3-12-2005 - 10:02 PM)
| wow great poem after readin that i reaalize that im like the girl u speak of in ur poem this guy im friends wit is like u in your poem. to bad i cant get my friend 2 learn from u lol. but yeah i really liked ur poem if its ok it u id like 2 no if its ok if i re write it but from the girls point of view based on wut u said in urs but if u dont want me 2 thats cool i understand. plz get back 2 me n let me no. thanx ur poem really made me think bout how i treat my friend |
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