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Rain
written by gothicbob696901:04 AM 11/24/04Rain fell last night- quiet, gentle rain
That tapped against my window pane
And called me back from troubled sleep,
To soothe a heart too numb to weep.
My loneliness was too deep and real,
And like a wound that would not heal,
It throbbed within me, and I knew
My arms were empty without you.
But as I listened to the sound
Of soft rain falling on the ground,
I heard your voice, tender and clear,
Call my name, and oh my dear,
I threw my window open wide,
To let the sweet rain rush inside.
It kissed my lips, my eyes, my hair,
And love, I knew that you were there.
Tears that my heart could not release
Fell down from Heaven, bringing peace.
Last night while gray clouds softly wept,
I held you in my arms and slept. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Darkwolfgirl (11-24-2004 - 01:10 AM)
| very cool. i really like this poem. rain acting like your tears is very creative. great job. kickass poem. |
by Kittie366 (11-24-2004 - 04:14 AM)
| you should be really proud of this poem, its beautiful |
by Silentx_suicide (1-26-2005 - 05:32 AM)
by FierceMystery (3-2-2005 - 06:22 AM)
| wow....i agree with all of the above |
by melpomene_blessed_89 (3-4-2005 - 08:53 PM)
| wow...that is so beautifully written...i dedicate this poem to myself ;) |
by poetic_tragity_x (4-22-2005 - 12:54 PM)
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