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teenage suicide
written by gothicbob6969
05:20 AM 11/24/04
I thought of dying
gazing into the black, seductive ice water
so glassy and so tranquil
I thought of dying
but in my place
Death's bony embrace
clutched listless children
gnawed by hunger;
prisoners on death row
detritus of their own childhoods;
poor shepherds grazing blunt-toothed animals
on landmined hillsides

I thought of dying,
to throw myself away
so much landfill
If it's no use to me
I could give it
I can holler with my lungs
at injustice
join hands in protest
at brutality
I realized that I had long been dead
but I could choose instead
to reawake
and be alive for them


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by Darkwolfgirl (11-25-2004 - 10:44 PM)
great poem.

by FeeFee (12-2-2004 - 08:06 PM)
Great poem you know what you should do turn up your music really loud and jump up and down

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