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Like a computer
written by Trapezium07:05 PM 11/24/04I feel like a computer,
I'm messed around with until my user's had enough,
I'm shut down to dwell on my mistakes,
I start up again with an error message,
And they bash me because they don't understand.
They wonder why I'm so slow when,
They can't even do it themselves!
When I've been theirs for too long,
They find a better one to replace me,
None of my files are deleted so I remember every wrong.
When I get a virus it's not the end of the world,
But I can't fix it on my own.
I have to do everything they want,
Or they'll think there's something wrong with me,
I'm not allowed a mind of my own,
If I ever do what I really want,
They "cleanse" me.
Cleanse is just a pretty word to mask the evil brainwashing.
Well this computer says fuck you all,
It says it in a big red font,
This computer doesn't care if you disconnect it from the mains,
'Cause you know it's right. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It's kinda shit but please don't laugh.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-24-2004 - 07:07 PM)
| okay, i've never felt like a computer before, any ways its cool |
by KaoticKitty87 (11-24-2004 - 07:07 PM)
by maledeth (11-25-2004 - 10:18 AM)
| Hahahahahahaha! Like a Computer?! I feel like a foxx..yes..with two x's....Anyways, I kid with you on the laughing.....but your comparison to a filth box is very nicely put. Even I understand this pc mumbo fuckin jumbo! Well, keep on writing...go on! nice job. |
by dacode05 (11-26-2004 - 03:23 AM)
| Very creative. I like it. |
by mokat1012 (11-28-2004 - 07:32 AM)
| .........ok................. |
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