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» Poem: Mom?
Mom?
written by KaoticKitty87
08:59 PM 11/24/04
My life is broken
in my mind Im screaming
the lies you have spoken
have left me weeping
you always yell at me
for no reason I think
you always hit me til I cant see
into the very earth I wish I could sink
you make me feel as if Im not good enough
you make me feel as if I am worthless
loving me must be tough
but do I really deserve this?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just to clarify I was never hit, the words she yells when shes angry feel like a blow, and I end up crying til it hurts to open my eyes

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» Comments / Feedback
by Morbid Angel (11-24-2004 - 09:50 PM)
Nobody deserves it.

by NirvanaGirl23 (11-24-2004 - 11:51 PM)
its really good. and you deffinitely dont deserve it. .xox. Lauren p.s. no matter how hard it is to love someone, you shouldnt hit them...

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