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» Poem: I died for you
I died for you
written by Trapezium
04:32 PM 11/25/04
You'll wake me up in the morning,
And find that I'm not there,
I'll be laying, dead to the world.

You'll do everything to wake me,
But your everything is not enough,
Just as I wasn't enough, for you.

You'll be crying because you realise,
How much pain your torture inflicted,
That's why I'll be dead When you read this.

You'll see the note and read what it says,
You'll wonder why you pushed me so far,
You pushed me so far, death was the only answer.

You'll be upset that I'm not there,
But you'll still be relieved your work paid off,
I'll be gone, who are you going to torture then?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
It's for my mum, even though she probably wont read it.

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» Comments / Feedback
by melons (11-25-2004 - 04:49 PM)
you no what i will do if you die love u babes nice poem :)

by tortured_goth_4life (11-25-2004 - 06:59 PM)
wow...thats good...thats how i feel..i can totally relate to that

by (anonymous) (11-25-2004 - 08:44 PM)
Hey I liked your poem alot.. pretty cool....talk to you later take care hun. :Hugs.: Sara

by dacode05 (11-26-2004 - 03:33 AM)
Sandy, please mssg me. I'll be here all night and morning as I can.

by Psycho_Penguin (11-26-2004 - 06:14 AM)
Sad, but I can relate... It's a great poem.

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