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written by Trapezium03:29 PM 6/11/0414 hours
he lied there
unconscious
because of one
one weapon
one person
this weapon
should not be
used in this context
this weapon
is vibrant
and strong
this weapon
can be broken
but it's long
people may
say it a spell
cast on oneself
but it is not
it is not just a feeling
it is not just a weapon
it is not just
something to be
thrown away
although it can be
and it will be
this cannot be helped
if it could
it would
This weapon
is love. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Think about it, think about how much hurt it can bring, think about all painful things about love. Then wipe it away and remember the feeling of being loved, that's enough.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by CrackMonkey1212 (6-11-2004 - 03:49 PM)
| Wow thats a good poem i like the way you related love to a weapon becaze now that i think about it love is like a weapon it can hurt the same way..............Awsome keep writing |
by Norway_babe (6-12-2004 - 02:53 PM)
| awesome babe:) keep it up:D |
by Unholy_Blasphemies (7-23-2004 - 12:56 PM)
| Woah.... just like all your other poems... i can totally relate to them all x |
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