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» Poem: Insensitive
Insensitive
written by lil2twistid4u
09:44 PM 11/25/04
I could die and you wouldn't care,
I cry and you pick on me,
Trying to open up to you is like hell,
You call me names and tease me,
It bothers me,
I try to stick by you anyways,
You make it so difficult to like you,
Can't we try and make it work?
But you're gone now and I'm glad,
I feel so much more normal now,
I can be myself today,
I can say whatever I want,
I won't worry about pissing you off,
I don't care, be pissed if you want,
You deserve it,
You made me so angry and confused,
Not at you but at myself,
Your insensitivity was my problem,
Now I'm all better,
Take your insensitive ass somewhere else.


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by dancingrooster08 (11-25-2004 - 11:30 PM)
The last line is the best. erika.

by liddle xxx punk (11-26-2004 - 06:15 PM)
i like this....

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