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» Poem: You said...
You said...
written by stumpyfratboy
01:38 AM 11/27/04
You said to me “I love you”
And you took me by surprise
How can I prove how much I love you
As I gaze into your eyes?

Words cannot express this love I feel
They do not even come close.
You fill my heart up to the brim
And each time I gaze upon you, it over flows.

You said to me “I love you”
And I was struck down dumb.
I knew not what to do, nor knew what to say.
All I knew to do, was to your love succumb.

I know that now you’ve said this,
One thing has been made true.
I shall be yours forever,
And you will be mine too.


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» Comments / Feedback
by Confused_Girl (11-27-2004 - 02:59 AM)
I LOVED the poem, it was exactly how i felt when this boy said it to me the other day. Thank you, and if you don't mind i am going to read that to him, but if you do then i won't. That is like the only think i have read in a long time that has explained the way i have felt about someone. Keep writing!

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