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» Poem: razor blades cut the most
razor blades cut the most
written by DeaD_DyinG_PaiN
05:54 PM 11/27/04
Sharp, as it cuts it turns your wound cold like ice, the thinnest blade cuts the deepest no your not doing it right cut down the middle make it count. Oh shit I cut to deep wow I’m dizzy no I’m okay ill just lay down and close my eyes I’m fine just tired. Why wont it stop bleeding please get me a towel. I fall asleep and find myself just to wake up to the same old shit, drugs and pain. I walk lonely streets and nothing not even my shadow stands my ground. They all call me names freak, dike, ugly why cant they just face me flat out say it don’t hide from me. Oh my beautiful love, Geoff have a token of relief I set my soul free. What’s the point of having wings if you cant feel the wind on your face? What’s the point of life if I cant even hold you without you Geoff things don’t seem the same. Its all just a blur a fucked up movie that someone taped together hoping it would work. The good times, bad times, the fun times warp together and I have to cut it all away I’m dizzy and fall hard on the bathroom floor and awake from a piercing light being flashed in my eyes from someone hoping for me to give a sign a sign of my life worth being brought down into your spin of hopes and dreams. Just close your eyes and go back to the beginning when I smiled and not cried. I never meant to hurt them but why shouldn’t they feel pain I do I just want them to see how it feels to cry and not laugh. I never meant to be cold and hurtful yeah right I want you to bleed me a fucking ocean. Show me you love me hold me and make this endless but dying pain go away I don’t want it. It just pulls me under and I cant breath. I’m so cold I cant feel you there am I alone?


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» Comments / Feedback
by lostdreamz08 (11-27-2004 - 06:02 PM)
GREAT POEM...u2u me sumtime~

by KaoticKitty87 (11-27-2004 - 06:09 PM)
its good

by sheded_tears (1-19-2005 - 08:49 PM)
pretty it made me think back to what i have done to my very own arm. cutting way too deep even once is too many. *bloody bites and kisses with razor sharp tearz* TTYL

by satanist_bitch (2-6-2005 - 05:07 AM)
good poem... it brings back times of my troubles.. and the troubles that i still have..

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