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Dreaming
written by Trapezium06:13 PM 11/27/04I dream of a christmas with my beautiful wife,
Our two gorgeous kids are playing in the snow,
We're sitting together smiling at each other,
For once my feelings have been shown.
There's baubles on the green christmas tree,
They reflect the snowflakes and the christmas lights,
I'm with someone I love, a sleeping beauty,
And for once I'm not alone on these cold nights.
There's presents placed carefully around the tree,
The fire's on and we're warm together in our arms,
The kids are laughing like beautiful Angels,
One moment seems like eternity's forever calmed.
I look into your eyes and we're caught up in the motion,
I tell you how much you mean and I stroke your hair,
We're just laying here, together filled with love,
For once in my life I know that someone cares.
Our beautiful children rush in and tell us they love us,
They thank us for their presents and fill the room with smiles,
They run out of the room to play innocently,
We sleep softly loving each other all the while.
For me to have my wish I have to tell you how I feel,
I need to say three little words, "I love you",
If I say these words, they're exactly what I mean,
I'll do anything to make this dream come true. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Thankyou so very fucking much you gay cunt Robin. This was the best poem I ever fucking wrote and then that fucking prick deletes it. I don't remember any of it, only the bits about christmas... there was at least 10 stanzas besides them and I don't remember the exact fucking words... that's so fucking depressing. I'm crying so hard, they don't understand how much my poems mean. When one gets deleted or lost, it's a broken memory, it's gone. This was so much betetr before, it had loads of other emotons in it, not just about the perfect christmas. I'm sorry my brother had to delete it.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by FeeFee (11-27-2004 - 06:36 PM)
| I like this poem even if the first version was better |
by melons (11-28-2004 - 12:20 PM)
| oi you niked my lil thing i said to you to make u feel better im asuming that ur wife is alice... |
by Living_hurts (11-28-2004 - 02:06 PM)
| Awww, that is such a lovely poem, I hope so much that it comes true for you. I know you mean well, you don't go out to hurt people, but the thing is, you mean a lot to people, whether you believe it or not, and because they care, its easier for them to get hurt. You are a good person despite what some people may think, and you deserve to be happy, so I really hope you get what you want. Love Luceh ~xXx~ |
by dacode05 (11-29-2004 - 07:09 PM)
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