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The Smell of Death
written by ieatsmellysocks04:12 PM 11/28/04Its dark and im all alone
There is no one home
Theres a scribbled note lying on my bed
That they can read when they find me dead
My arms are bleeding the empty bottle of pills is on the floor
The note says "I cant take it anymore
Ive tried so hard just to be strong
I tried so hard but everything went wrong"
Well im dying,the carpet is stained with red
I wonder who will clean up the mess,clean up the blood i bled
The smell of coagulated blood is in the air
I wonder if anyone will notice im gone, will anyone care
Its dark and he's all alone
He unfortunately just got home
Theres a scribbled note lying on my bed
That he read over and over when he found me dead |
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I know,it sucks.But please comment...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Elariel (11-28-2004 - 04:15 PM)
by zxSilent_Suicidexz (11-28-2004 - 04:19 PM)
| it is sad, but very good at the same time. |
by rose~in~the~rain (11-28-2004 - 04:31 PM)
| It didn't suck, it was very good. |
by psycopathic_juggalette420 (11-28-2004 - 05:35 PM)
| it dont suck, its good, it is sad, and i know im repeating what everyone else said, but its true. aight MCL. |
by psycopathic_juggalette420 (11-28-2004 - 05:41 PM)
| it dont suck, its good, it is sad, and i know im repeating what everyone else said, but its true. aight MCL. |
by devilchild01 (11-28-2004 - 06:45 PM)
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