ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: Animated Blind Strokes
Animated Blind Strokes
written by sitting_in_the_dark
04:50 PM 11/28/04
Escape from this the evil day…
The inside pondering with grey…
All falls and fails…
Stops to rain and hails…
My box made of lies and betrayals…
I’m leading this war against life…
I’m dropping the knife...
Picking up my pencil and I write…
Trying to correct my wrong doings and make it right…
In this one lust…
You feel you just must…
Go on with whatever comes…
Live off the crumbs…
Everything so far from reach…
Not enough carnage for each…
Alone this sorrow cuts…
My self defensive ammunition shuts…
Can’t fight it off…
Might be a bit too rough…
I spot no one…
I know when I’m defeated and I know when I’ve won…
This spotless poetry…
A forgotten mystery to be…
Let myself go away and picturing the worst…
Never felt such strong thirst…
For the blood I never had…
What I can’t have just instigates and makes me mad…
I choke my neck to make it sleep…
I scratch these eyes to make them weep…
Like too much to feel this rush…
I pour my blood and soak my brush…
I begin my crying portrait


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i didnt write this one myself...it belongs to my good friend gabriel..hes the best writer ive ever read of their work....he amazing..

[ View sitting_in_the_dark's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 65 times


» Comments / Feedback
by rose~in~the~rain (11-28-2004 - 04:54 PM)
That was awesome.

» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.