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» Poem: Hold me one last time
Hold me one last time
written by Dark Shady
08:15 PM 11/28/04
I hold my breath trying to kill my brain, I slit my wrist to make my heart burst, I try to end my life but why, why do I try, all I can do is look down off my roof and remember when we first came up here and you were scared but trusted me and felt safe, I found you crying and I just sat down said nothing and held you, you said that its hard to tell when I did or if I did care about you, all I could reply with is now my heart hurts, you said its hard to tell if or when I loved you all I could say was now my heart is in peaces, now I look on out past been thro the rough stuff for a while but why do I look into the past, blood flowing and dripping off my arm as if it was a waterfall, breath gone body dieing slowly, all I can say is if I cried would you hold me, if I was scared would I trust you and feel safe, you find my body lifeless still cold, my heart came to the surface, would you hold me? Would u cry and ask why? Pfft why would u care...*walks off*


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by (anonymous) (11-29-2004 - 12:25 AM)
thats exactly how i feel. awsome poem completly real and full of feeling ::claps::

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