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» Poem: i want to tell you
i want to tell you
written by Schizophrenic_broken
06:40 PM 11/29/04
feel like my heart is broken
and i cant talk to anyone
i know you hate me now
hurt you is what i've done
want you to take my apology
want you to be my mate
to tell you how much it means
but i guess it's far too late
i know that i stole from you
the thing that means the most
then i guess i turnes to you
to rub it in and boast
but i never meant to do it
never meant to hurt you
so now i'm sitting hurt and cold
thinking of things that i could do
but the thoughts aint working
and my heart is slowly crying
crying all my unshed tears
while i lay here slowly dying
i never ment to fall in love
and i regret it with my life
thinking of how he hurt me
back to step one with the knife
i should have taken your advice
i always knew that you were right
yet the way that i was feeling
was covering my sight
i never believed he was true
never really thought he cared
yet my stupid heart was tricking me
of love never shared


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» Comments / Feedback
by emptyheart (11-29-2004 - 07:11 PM)
crazy, that was pretty good

by bloodlyvalentine (11-29-2004 - 09:18 PM)
seriously, you confuse me like hell and maybe if you didnt keep doing things wrong you woudnt even HAVE to apolagise, stop making this bigger than it is for gods sakes, he only asked for ur number not for him to marry you or some shit like that

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