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bottom of the ocean
written by melons07:05 PM 11/29/04Deep dark red surrounding my head
Next to me the ragged edges of the,
Long silver blood stained knife
Lifeless and pale my face goes
No light to my eyes
No blood in my veins
No air in my body
No colour in my face
From the corners of my eyes a tear,
Starts to form a dark red glides down my face
The only colour to my body apart from white
The tear becomes a stream
The stream becomes a river
The river becomes an ocean
And lying at the bottom of that ocean remains,
Of the loved and the lost never to be found again |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (11-29-2004 - 07:08 PM)
| wow, that's amazing. It's so beautiful. *speechless* |
by darktinkerbell (11-30-2004 - 06:14 PM)
| wow, I love this, it almost made me cry, I don't know what else to say : x |
by melons (12-11-2004 - 11:50 PM)
| this was ritten on licies b day party by toria.
i fink its brill!
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