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» Poem: What Is Wrong With Her???
What Is Wrong With Her???
written by devils angel 13
09:26 PM 11/29/04
Everywhere I go,
Everyone I see...
Wonder what is wrong...
Wonder whats wrong with me...

But its the old heartbreak,
Of an old love,
And of an old game he played...

He said he loved me...
He said he cared,
And yet he was never
EVER
there....

So I hold on to his kiss,
How his hands felt,
How his smile looks...
Cause I cant live without them...


but i still dont have HIM...
Just his memories...
I am going to die...
Wihout HIM


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
::sighs:: truth is hard...

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» Comments / Feedback
by dacode05 (11-29-2004 - 09:29 PM)
you get deeper and darker...great write!

by cheer_up_emo_kid (11-29-2004 - 09:42 PM)
good poem

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