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» Poem: So Fucking Fake
So Fucking Fake
written by lil2twistid4u
10:21 PM 11/29/04
I hate you,
I hate being around you,
I wish I had never met you,
You're fine when we're alone,
Around others you aren't you,
Around boys you act like a fucking slut,
"I could deep throat that shit.",
I just wish you'd go away,
And when you're in "love" you say,
"I feel more like myself around him",
If thats the real you then don't even speak to me,
You're disgusting,
I tryed to accept the slutty shit,
But you had to start sucking my life away,
You're so fake that there isn't even a real you.


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» Comments / Feedback
by dacode05 (11-29-2004 - 10:33 PM)
mmm...k. Glad you're getting it out.

by sweetcatastrophe (11-29-2004 - 10:57 PM)
i used to have a friend who acts like nothing but a tramp when shes around boys so i can really relate to this poem i like it good job

by dancingrooster08 (12-1-2004 - 02:44 AM)
DAMN. erika.

by liddle xxx punk (12-1-2004 - 11:57 PM)
okay....wow.........

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