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Death and Destruction
written by twistedmind3302:45 AM 11/30/04Everywhere I look
Death and destruction
I'm stuck in the middle of chaos
While everyone else is smiling
Why is everyone acting so fake?
Almost like nothing's happened
But everything has changed
Everybody says they're okay,
But it' all a lie
We're walking around with these strange feelings in our stomachs
There is no magical cure
They say only time will help
But really time will only make it worse
Nothing will help
No one understands
They try to help you,
But really you want to be alone
?You're far from help
The only solution is to start over
And forget everything you thought you knew |
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this was written like a week ago when I was thinking about the death of a very close friend of the family that died recently [ View twistedmind33's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 353 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by goth2pain (11-30-2004 - 03:05 AM)
HEY WOW YOUR POEM IS GREAT I CAN RELATE TO IT SO MUCH |
by ChewUpTheGlass (11-30-2004 - 03:31 AM)
I really like your poem. It reminds a lot of my life. I put on a show to show i'm happy but deep down i have a black, broken heart. |
by ChewUpTheGlass (11-30-2004 - 03:34 AM)
And also, relating to my story, I had one of my best friends kill himself right after he turned 16. And I miss him so much and I loved him like my own brother. |
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