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black feathers
written by bloodlyvalentine06:31 PM 11/30/04i cant breathe...
suffocating,
in my own silence
in my own fears
just drowning
in a pool blood
dont know where it come from
from which cut it flows
the way i bathe
in you sin
when you died
coz i cant let you go
and never will
when you left me here
all alone
in the cod
in this white forest
i wait for you
frost on my breathe
and black ravens in the trees
shining black sunshine
down on me
the way i see you
dressed in black
in my dreams
so close i can feel you
and touch your skin
but still you are
as far away from me
as possible
i dont know when we will
be one again
your black feathers will engulf me
take me in and cherish me
when the time is right
you will be there
to take me away
and never return |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by maledeth (12-5-2004 - 08:42 AM)
| This is a very good one....How long have you been writing? I see that you are in touch with your feelings....lovely, I say....and you turn it into some complacent for the soul....Keep on makiing passionate poems....and I'll keep wanting.... |
by bloodlyvalentine (12-5-2004 - 12:05 PM)
| thanks maledeath, i been writing since like 12 and im 15 now but i only started posting my stuff recently, |
by PredictableHatred (12-21-2004 - 12:25 PM)
| This is a very interesting poem.. You did a wonderful job with this... Please, never quit writing. |
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