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MY paradise
written by LaDyJ on307:05 PM 11/30/04This is MY heaven
MY paradise
This is MY mountain of diamonds
Where your corpses lay in my crimson river
Where your washed away with all my pain
And I smile over you all soaring my sun-kite
Giving my paradise clarity at last
i'm the one crowned with gold and bold
Following that I look around at my individual world
With a notice I see that I’m still alone
Bodies washing away with no one sparing
On top of MY glistening mountain I cry once more
Realizing that even in my own paradise…
I’ll always be on my own |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
(made this poem on the spot. was inspired to ake it by the first verse on the song 'Jeremy' by Pearl Jam...made my own plot and end)
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