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Untitled**
written by LaDyJ on3
08:02 PM 11/30/04
This dark cloud lives over me
Pouring these thoughts-its controling me!
I cant breathe
i cant walk
Ive collapsed inside and i cant get up
Deep inside im deceased
am i alive?
am i here?
i no longer feel myself present
In this still place with everyone around
Flashing dirty looks as they pass
i feel so alone
these tears only prove their strength
i'll bleed before i cry...
(someone says)
"cry no more you've shed tears for too long"
this is MY pain, i'll shed blood in it's place
This is my place....
:slit my wrist and then my throat:


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
A very short monologue...u can call it a dialogue but theres only a little part where someone else says something....fuck it..i'll call it a dialogue

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