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» Poem: Too Long
Too Long
written by darktinkerbell
08:04 PM 11/30/04
7 days, thats,
168 hours,
and 9960 minutes
since I've seen you.
the time is going by
slower by the hour,
only one hour has passed
since I've forced myself
to open my eyes
without you,
what does my day mean?
what is the reason for me
to even rise from this bed?
I pulled the blanket off myself
and felt the cold hit me,
like a knife. I shivered,
wrapped the blanket around
my weak body,
and sat at the table
waiting for something...
anything...
nothing...nothing
but silence, loud silence
screaming a whispered secret
in my ear. the day is lagging,
it's only 9:43, and I give up,
I lay back down,
lying awake, thinking of you
it's been too long since I've held you
and kissed your sweet lips,
I'm longing for that
more than ever right now.
it's been too long,
and I miss you, tomorrow's only
a day away, but today,
tortures me as it drags.
tomorrow is too long from now
but, I'll be missing you, now until tomorrow


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by trulybroken57 (11-30-2004 - 08:48 PM)
i feel that way when i dont c my boyfriend

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