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My Shooting Star
written by darktinkerbell
10:10 PM 11/30/04
I know your secrets
ones you just can't hide
I know it all, all the pain you feel inside
I can see your heart through your eyes,
and I smile, knowing how much you try
to hide it from everyone else
I'm not your flesh and blood
but I'm your sister none the less
you're scared I'm going to say something,
but my silence says it all.
I can't say it's all ok, cause it's not
you made me cry, and I don't think
I know who you are anymore
everything that made you stand tall,
everything that made me look up to you,
everything that made you a man,
has been knocked down,
it's no one's fault but yours.
I know it's your life, but I do care
I'll give you time to come clean,
no matter what, you know
I'm there, right or wrong,
and this time you know you were wrong
I just hope you can forgive yourself,
and I forgive you, you're still thought of
as the strong one, but only I can see
how weak you really are
you're on the ground,
needing me to help you up,
but this time, you have to be a bitch
and ask for it, ask me for the help you need
ask what you seek,
and I will grant whatever wish you want
you are the brightest star in the sky
my shooting star,
my big brother


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is for Ernie, please fix it, you know what you did

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