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My Only Outlet
written by Lady Deathstrike02:36 AM 12/1/04Run to my room
slam the door
another bad day
don't care anymore
turn the music up high
and try not to cry
pull my sleeve up
exposing reminders of other bad days
grab the knife
it hurts a lot
but pain is my outlet for life
drag the blade across my skin
over and over and over again
lay back
the pain makes my mind drift away
I feel dizzy
like it better this way
forget about tomorrow and the pain it wil bring
forget about my sorrows
pretend its not me |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
it took me roughly one minute to right this poem. I wrote it a few months ago. (take it and I will eat you) comments welcome.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by lostdreamz08 (12-1-2004 - 03:12 AM)
| dont want u eatin me...mind if i put it on my page but recongnize *YOU* as the writer...its an awesome poem*duh why else would i want to use it* lol...newayz u2u me or w.e n let me know...its really good~ |
by pulse_ofthe_maggots (12-2-2004 - 11:46 PM)
| yes i love it. it reminds me so much of me and sounds a lot like poems that i have written. i normally dont show those to people though anywhoz i'd luv to talk to u sumtime
*~nicole~* |
by Krakenphonic (12-3-2004 - 04:42 AM)
| um... explainitory... um good. Why do you have to cut yourself? I have felt pain all of my life- physical emotional mental- all of it. cutting doesnt do any good!!! all it does is crews up your skin, and its not worth it unless its a BATTLE wound. cutting just makes you seem weak, that you have to bring more pain to ajust to the old, so you get used to it... sorry... Im just so tired of hearing well people cut ooohh its so bad and satanic or whatever... I just hate it when people give false scars... AKA cutting themselves. Eh... oh well if thats your outlet so be it, I get rid of mine mentally. lol oh well its an OKaY poem
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by lil_scared_princess (12-4-2004 - 11:56 PM)
| hey i just got your comment thanks i like yours also keep on writing ..i wrote more i will put them up |
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