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» Poem: cold as ice
cold as ice
written by sitting_in_the_dark
02:04 PM 12/1/04
You broke my heart once…
You broke my heart twice…
And you wonder why my heart is as cold as ice…
As I sit there I wonder how nice it would be to slice…
As I take my final breathes…
I try to picture you in my mind…
But in the end I know you don’t care….
When I take the blade it sucks and drain all the pain away…
I say good-bye to the pain you brought…
And every thing you ever thought…
And for all the times we fought...
Also..to al the love thats been lost


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
umm.. i kow whta your thinking....what a loser...cant even keep a guy....but...yeah your right...

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» Comments / Feedback
by cryptic_misery (12-1-2004 - 03:23 PM)
I know what you are going through, I think it's a wonderful poem though =) don't worry hun the heartache will pass in due time

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