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» Poem: taunting me
taunting me
written by bleedblack
01:27 AM 12/2/04
i'm getting confused
from the things you say
what do you mean
what are you trying to convey

i want you to say
that you want me so bad
but i know that won't happen
its just a dream i had

i feel that you like me and
that you want me around
but then you say your not ready
i thought happiness i found

why must you tease me
tell me we could be
then you take it away
when i was nearly free

when i'm not around you
i get so depressed
things just aren't right
i just get so stressed

i want you to be happy
and for you to have the best
but maybe i could be the one
but all i can do is suggest

but in all honesty
what do you think of me
is there any hope or chance
that we could ever be?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
there is a guy i have like for about a year and a half and we have been flirting and talking about getting together but nothing seems to be happening ... its really stressing me out .. .i know its not the best poem .. sorry

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by mystic 1 (12-2-2004 - 01:36 AM)
it's really good and i can really relate to it good luck on the relationship front

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