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burning in hell
written by devilchild01
08:55 PM 12/2/04
Staring at the blackness in front of my eyes,
dreaming of the wonderful things I want
It would be a heavenly life if there were no lies,
no pain no hate no cheats just love
but it means nothing to them, they have no feelings
This all seems to be a nightmare a on going story,
of pain and torment that continues
to hunt me down night and day awake and asleep.
Everyone seems like they are walking in clouds
whilst I'm left here on this unearthly world,
I watch as they live so beautifully
They taunt as I look at what I can’t have.
I'm stuck on this unearthly world,
Being pulled further into a black hole.
Filled with flames passion hot
I'm burning up with the heat,
These emotions are strong, they run untamed,
unable to be caught, they run free.
But really I have no one that’s willing to help me.
I have no real friends. Just people who seemed to like me.
Now I know the truth I'm just the tag along
You find with each group wanting to belong but never does.
I am misunderstood but no one ever tries
To understand what I am going though,
After all it’s only me; they think I'm not worth the bother.
Its what they all think, and I agree along with them
I was left with the hurt and the lies to cope with myself,
I am left alone while I writhe and die.
But does it matter when I am a insignificant being


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yes well im feeling great at the moment cant you tell

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by EvilTiger (12-29-2004 - 09:05 AM)
I feel like I will burn in hell not alone.The people I know is the only thing that will be with me forever and this poem you wrote is a good meaning to it.

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