» Poem: Fear |
Fear
written by lpcrawlinggrl01:55 AM 12/3/04Fear is someting we all have to live with
It can make us the most scared at times
I know, I have the feeling everyday
Not knowing if I'll wake back up
A blood thursty scream, a shreik of terror, a peaceful sigh, every second
The clock takes life away, it's so unreal, but it is, we all know it
Drops of blood, tears of sad, letting ourselves, saying "What have I done?"
Knowing the answers, it's all the same, with one simple thing, we are our own fear |
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wrote this when i couldnt get to sleep one nite [ View lpcrawlinggrl's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 154 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by blbardsley (12-3-2004 - 02:01 AM)
awesome poem, you know this could be song lyrics too if you changed a little here and there or maybe not at all, i love it good work |
by lpcrawlinggrl (12-3-2004 - 02:05 AM)
i prefer songs,but this slipped out....good idea though,put my other song on hold and figure this one,thnx!
-kaye |
by (anonymous) (12-3-2004 - 02:39 AM)
wow thas like really good! |
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