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The Demons Inside
written by Lady Deathstrike02:39 AM 12/3/04There's blood on the floor
she can no longer ignore
death is too high a price to pay
she can't continue living this way
There's something inside her
something she can't explain
but she knows its there
she can feel the pain
It's growing stronger with each passing day
leading her on
showing her the way
as the darkness comes she begs to be free
there's something there, something she can't see
She knows what it is
the creature that kills
it's her own soul
and it's deadly and real
She can't control it
can't stop the pain
It continues to thrive with each passing day
she says to herself
I'll get help soon
and herself says right back
no not yet, wait another day
For the time is now
and the day is today
whose life will she take
only her freinds remain
when she's up at the stand
everyone listening in
will she claim to be insane?
Is death too high a price to pay?
Her pain is growing, it's tearing up her heart
She can't continue, can't talk, doesn't know when to stop
And then her own life she ends
death is no longer a childish game of pretend
Now listen to the story I told you it could happen soon
because sometimes your biggest enemy is you |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
my poem...yay. Comments comments welcome....bleh.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by blbardsley (12-3-2004 - 02:43 AM)
| oh man thats awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved it, great work!! |
by Krakenphonic (12-3-2004 - 02:48 AM)
| wow. you are very good. I also have the philosophy, you are your biggest enemy. and yes, the price to pay for killing someone including yourself, is very high indeed... I know. |
by goth2pain (12-3-2004 - 05:42 AM)
| OH MY GOD I LOVE YOUR POEM ITS SO TRUE AND ITS WHAT I FEEL |
by bloodstanedtears (2-10-2005 - 07:36 PM)
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