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I was Mistaken (you weren't the one)
written by Lady Deathstrike04:26 AM 12/3/04I thought we had it all
I thought I was in love
I still have your stupid smile
burned in my mind
All the shit that we did
All the promises you made
Did you ever even care?
Did you erase your memory of me?
Even though I know its wrong
I miss you still
and not a day goes by
that I don't look at your picture and cry
I heard this saying once,
"dont cry for someone who wouldn't cry for you"
I used to think that it was right
But now I'm not so sure
Why'd you have to go?
You where everything I wanted
Everything I ever loved
You where everything I needed
so why'd you have to go?
Frozen in place
Frozen by your gaze
I guess I'm still stuck on you
I guess its true
This sucks
I'm moving on
I was wrong
Your not the one |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
bleh. this is one of my worst poems ever...I just randomly typed it up right now...but oh well, it pretty much says everything I needed to say about my ex. Comments welcome...(yes, I read them...I actually check each of my poems every five minutes!!! Kinda lame. o.O)
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Krakenphonic (12-3-2004 - 04:35 AM)
| you did THAT randomly? just typed it up good done whatever? jeeze you guys are good! |
by capricornchk (12-3-2004 - 05:06 AM)
| wow that was awesome. i totally know how u feel. |
by missypissy2004 (12-3-2004 - 05:44 AM)
| i know how ya feel...that was good |
by discontented_child (12-3-2004 - 06:09 AM)
| Yeah i have been there and it sux and i kinda still am there. But i still cant beleive you just typed that up off your head that takes talent and you have it thats for sure. |
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