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Judgement
written by chaoticthoughts
04:56 AM 12/3/04
As I lay awake at night, pondering to myself, is it really worth it? Is my existence of great importance here?
Rebel by choice, insomniac by diagnosis. Original by choice, bi-polar by diagnosis. Creative by choice, depression by diagnosis. Cutter by choice, oppositional disorder by diagnosis. Outcast by choice, insane by diagnosis. All these things I did not choose yet, I am being reprrimanded for them. All these things I cannot control yet, I am being scolded for them. Would you blame a handicapp for not being able to run? Would you yell at a mentally slow child for spilling milk? Would you look down upon on a person who is an addict, but can't afford help? No, probably not. So why am I punished for my actions that sometimes cannot be controled? Why am I constantly being told I am a failure, when I did not choose to be one? Why?


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can't sleep

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by nobody (12-3-2004 - 04:57 AM)
thats good

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