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Silence is short
written by .purity.07:23 PM 12/3/04bombs make alot of noise
then there is silence. |
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short, but meaningful.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by wee_Sevi (12-3-2004 - 07:23 PM)
by wee_Sevi (12-3-2004 - 07:24 PM)
by Trapezium (12-3-2004 - 07:26 PM)
| More of a phrase than a poem. With the bombs part it sounds a little kiddy-ish. "Destruction is loud, then there is silence" Has a nice ring to it. |
by .purity. (12-3-2004 - 07:33 PM)
| yeah i only just joined this second and i got a little hyper cos i'm lonely so I didnt really think about the wording.
not much of an excuse.
ok, im stupid. |
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