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Give in
written by lost_cause09:25 PM 12/3/04| Time to give in. I can't take the pain anymore. Everytime I take one step, I am pushed back 3 more. I try harder and harder but I have not yet made the slightest improvement. I am so far away from everything I want and it's almost as if I can't get to it. Like the closer I think I am, the farther I will be away. It's confusing me really, going in all these circles of pain and disappointment. I think it may be over but I have now learned that the pain only goes on. You only become worse after this point... So why am I still trying? Why am I still having hope of retrieving my lost hopes, dreams, and happiness in life? But I feel if I don't keep fighting that I may just get stuck. Not moving forward or backward. I don't know about you but I would rather be moving back then be stuck... I mean, at least when you are moving you have something to keep you occupied. And when you finally give in, there's nothing to lose. |
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