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» Poem: Remember When Sara Grabbed The Gun?
Remember When Sara Grabbed The Gun?
written by Lady Deathstrike
10:36 PM 12/3/04
Jerked back into reality
as in his drunken rage
Daddy pulled the pistol out
and shot Mommy in the face

The children crouched under the bed
crying silent tears
as they watched their Mommy fall to the ground
They all knew she was dead

Daddy took out a knife
and grabbed Vanna's arm
He sliced and diced her wrist up
And did a lot of harm

Daddy took the beer bottle,
and cussing all the while
he broke it over Doggy's head
which really made him smile

Daddy stumbled around the house
laughing insanely
as Sara grabbed the gun

her arms shaking
she pointed the muzzle at Daddy's chest
pulled the trigger
there was a bang
and Daddy laid to rest


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
comments welcome. I just typed this one up now too...(three randoms in a row! wow I'm on a roll)

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» Comments / Feedback
by Riot_girl (12-4-2004 - 12:36 AM)
I really like this poem... I would have shot the s.o.b. too. Keep writing

by morbidlove04688 (12-4-2004 - 12:37 AM)
for a random poem this shit is awsome

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