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I love you still
written by lost_cause
10:42 PM 12/3/04
I know you are going through pain. I have not felt what you feel but I have been through pain. I love you so much and that is what you need to remember. You are important to me. I know she is gone and nothing will bring her back. You will forever be haunted by the image you've seen. She should have spared you. In killing herself she has murdered your consiousness. She has murdered you. Try not to replay it in your mind. Though I know if I had seen it I would never be sane again. Brian, she made a mistake in leaving you, and you are forever scarred. You are paying for what she did. But there are people that love you. I'm not one to talk considering I have never been as traumatized as you. But if you kill yourself, you will kill your dad. He loves you. He would be so empty and alone. I love you. It would break my heart to see you go. Just so you know, I love you.


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One of my good friends is very traumatized... I love him but I understand his wanting to die...

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